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September 24th, 2009, 1:41 pm

oh, how conveniently was that ruler stuck in the floor




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VANILLA'S LEGS REACH THE SKY Unfortunately, I didn't die, just almost broke my finger, so you won't get away from this stupid comic.
I'm very sick again, vomiting every night.
My father's and teacher's friend aka my teacher from the Russian Drama Theater I used to attend, who was a great actor died today.
I'm turning old 16 on Saturday.Bad times come again. wah. Ignore.
FANARTS
Uke flights to the starts are open for business by my beloved Vitamin:
http://vinyayy.deviantart.com/art/FLY-TO-THE-STAAARS-137878909
And delicious blue-eyed Jura by flurree:
http://flurree.deviantart.com/art/Jura-137441184
REPLIES:

*applause*Stalker<3: ha!You guessed right!It was Blythe and Taren from TWOTC!!! PM me, I will draw something for you, you name it!*applause*

The rest: yes, those were DBZ people!My favorite anime ever.
Kuro-Neko-Chan: you intrigued me!I wonder who could that be in that magazine.
Kurayami:hahaah!This is destiny, man.
starlingfeathers:I apologize again for my stupid mistake again, sorry sorry!
Blackrainfall:oh thank you twt make a comic!Yaoi fangrils love with their eyes, not their brains~
Aizu:thank you thank you thank you!
THANK YOU FOR READING/COMMENTING/FAVING ONCE MORE!
*milk+assassin*, September 24th, 2009, 2:04 pm Reply

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ha XD I love the last panel XD the expression is priceless XD

YAY
YOU UPDATED ON MY BIRTHDAY!!! :D 8D

:3 I like the landing. Jura has candy spinning around his head O:
Did Nilla cough up blood? o . o ?! In the second to last panel?

Oh ho ho Sexual Position? hehehehe

now all you need is to add a Herz in the equation and my life will be complete.

I really enjoy the tripping scene lol.

You make me smile

=D you updated the day after my bday!!

it ade me happy, seeing as my other comics updated sad pages, but this made my day, even if it was the day after

i looove the candies flying around Juras head

and wooo fan service! (almost)

wtf did he trip on? it looks like a ruler stuck in a crack in the ground. in any case xDDD love it~!

Goodness One must wonder what kind of school they go to that has rulers sticking out of the ground!!!

Now that's a landing.

I bet Alex has his cell out taking pictures... ^_^

The finger accident was from painballing? That's rough. Bruises are much more normal!

love it lmaO!!
cant wait for the next page
<3

J looks like he ready for face up butt smex...

Edit- Did V land on top of J, or is it the other way around????

I already knew your birthday was day 26 but I didn't say anything because you would think I'm a stalker D: *stalker*

I hope you have a happy birthday n_n

rofl are those boobs on the wall?

totally sucks that your dad's friend/your teacher/great actor died.
And that your sick again @_@ ayayay. I can sympathize with that i'm always getting sick and hurt. =P

Good luck. And happy early birthday! *sings Happy Birthday song*

Epic fall.

WAIT. I'M OLDER AND STILL LESS EXPERIENCED THAN YOU IN MAKING COMICS?
FUCCKKKK. I NEED TO GET ON IT.

HAPPY BIRTHDAY. MAKE IT A WILD ONE.
AND DON'T DO DRUGS.

FFF I JUST TURNED 15.
I'mthesameageasyoufornow! But damn you're good. D8
BUT LOL THIS WHOLE PAGE LOOKED PAINFUL.

Sex pose #3 Yes, it's #3 cause 1 and 2 are taken for females only.

To help your battle against sickness, you get an apple['s comment]! Sorry for having been so busy. I'm in Studio Art AP and no it is not the slacker advanced course, it's INTENSE. Thus, drawing has been sucking up my time and [sadly] school, college, and learning to drive are more important - no offense. BUT, I'm procrastinating to avoid my current panic and artist's block so COMMENTY TIME! I hope this makes you a bit happier and that happiness combats your unhealthiness.

Okay, loving Jura's expression as he starts to fall - absolutely priceless. It's one of those, "wait? My center of balance isn't here," kind of face things where he hasn't yet realized he's going to fall on his face. :] (by the way, I've made three of these faces. xD) Vanilla has the extra shading even though I'm shaded making SUPER ecstatic! That panel just makes me simile in it's expression. Only problem would be the hands are a little off - fingers look a little chubby and Vanilla's knuckles need shading. Other than that, BEAUTIFUL! Quick not for the trip and ruler part. The legs bother me. It's a bit of a conundrum because it looks good but doesn't make sense. His leg wouldn't be that low unless he was bending down and I don't think any one but my PE teacher does high leg marching while walking normally. I would also like to have seen a tiny bit of shading to add that 3D depth, but it was well drawn and looks good.
The fall scene has a couple of problems for me as well. Vanilla and Jura's hands looks strange bent like that. I know it's physically possible but it still doesn't look quite right. The other big thing is that all of the hands in the panel go the same direction and are in the same pose, which subtracts from the realistic(?) nature. And [as I always demand], more shading to show depth. I love the pose and that Vanilla has absolutely no control in the fall.
The bottom three panels are my favorite as of late. The movement in the first panel is brilliant: normal hitting into the wall ouchy. Then the excruciating pain of human projectiles is great. The thud lines give us that little impact, and then those speed lines all mixed up with Vanilla's expression - awesome. I especially love Vanilla's hand in that second to last panel. It shows that cringe of pain. Jura's pose is great too. I love how haphazard his arms are. It makes us realize, "hey, this wasn't planned but look how sexy it turned out to be." >D
The only thing that has just started to jug me (and only because my teacher pointed it out) is the labeling of objects. I know, sometimes it is appropriate or hilarious for political or witty humor, but I don't think you ever need to label a wall. It's a bit of a slight to the reader and yourself as an artist - though don't worry about it too much, just try not to state the obvious no matter how detail lacking something may be.

Okay, hope I haven't traumatized you instead of cheering you up. Feel better and thank you for the wonderful update. I really enjoyed all the expressions. :D

-apples

So what the hell? I dun even know where you live, plus I would be distracted you from school~ oh so important gr 11. =3= and my profs would kill me if I missed classes.

Oooh Jura~ how did you end up like that? xD Candy. THE SHIP! SO MUCH SHIPPING! I knew it! >D called your bluff!

*takes out a camera* nice.... very nice landing... I give it a deadly nosebleed outta 10

Gaah, I love this frikin' comic! XD U have nice imagination there. And ur style rocks dude.

Yay for accidents o/

I love this comment I also wanna do Fanart o:

8D I didn't even notice those were candies swirling around in the last panel... I thought it was the coughed up blood XD was thinking 'omg gross'

sorry you seem to be going through sometrough times lately =| hope things go well for you.

LMAO THIS PAGE. I CRACKED UP SO HARD.

I would draw a comic but i lack the proper skills OTL

i was just thinking....
so jura is stepping on a ruler, and falls... and vanilla is... eh... jumping on him, or is he stumbling too DX haha sory i'm retarded. .__.
anyway the last panel is pr0n. *n* *drool*

(also why i didn't notice there were blythe and taren :<<<< *cries*)

and man, you're old .__. yes 16 is old! SO HAPPY BIRTHDAY MAN!

AWKWARD POSITION FTW!

WHAT IS THAT FRENCH HE IS SPEAKING WHAT?
"WHERE?"

I KNEW IT! wait a sec :D I DID IT ohfhfkjdsh *shot* I'll figure it out... Is it okay if I pm you on dA?

hehe :3 I smell J + V love :3


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